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Nalani is new to being a shrinky, and probably not careful enough. Because of her choices, the native Hawaiian girl now has to cross an entire beach full of her least favorite kinds of people on the planet...tourists.
Another quick story from me! Not too much to say about this one, it's about as simple as the concepts get, but honestly it's my favorite kind of little vore story.
I've said it before, but I've come to realize that there's nothing I like more in vore than preds' "firsts." There's just so much going on internally there for the pred that I love to explore.
Anyway, as usual, let me know what you think, your thoughts and comment are my motivation to keep posting!
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Posted by akinata 1 year ago Report
good read.
i want to see how you would write a story about a willing prey and unwilling pred.
like a tiny doing absolutely everything to get swallowed but the unwilling pred(s?) stops everytime. (until it happens).
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
I don't want to say never because you never know when an idea will click, but unfortunately right now I just have zero interest in willing prey. It just doesn't make sense to me and kills my immersion.
Posted by doomed 1 year ago Report
Evil bitches like this are why people hate tourist XD
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
Yup, entitled, spoiled fucks...my favorite kind of pred :P
Posted by GGO 1 year ago Report
I'm with you on the first time preds. Love it. Definitely make more! Keep up the great work! You are top of the leaderboards in my mind.
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
Woo, rank 1! :P
Thanks, glad you think so.
Posted by LazySWV 1 year ago Report
I always love it when you give the prey such personality! This is an amazing story, keep up the good work! :D
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
Glad you think so, I was kind worried I didn't spend enough time on Nalani's character personally.
I always try to make the prey feel like a person and not just a disposable name and set of characteristics, but sometimes it's hard when you know they're going to be gone by the end of the story anyway, especially when trying to keep the page count low and the pacing quick.
Posted by blab123 1 year ago Report
Definitely agree that first-time preds are one of the best to write a story around, probably my second favorite archetype.
As for the story itself, I enjoyed how Nalani was super arrogant despite being a shrinky, and how it came back to bite her (pun intended), as well as Hailey basically just improvising the entire way through, making it really fun to follow her thought process as she made her way to her ultimate goal.
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
Yeah, more and more I'm kind of drawn to preds who aren't obsessed with being preds...like don't get me wrong, there's something fun about preds who are enthusiastic about what they're doing, but there's a whole 'nother layer of degradation when you become a snack for someone who's just doing it on a whim. Your life is that much less important to them, they're just doing it to you because they can.
Posted by johnnyboy246 1 year ago Report
As much as I like you longer stuff. I really love your more bite sized content (pun definitely intended)
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
I guess it's obvious from my output but recently I've been leaning that way as well. Just easier to sit down and write something short, with the longer stuff I need to always be checking previous chapters to make sure I'm keep continuity somewhat straight.
Posted by johnnyboy246 1 year ago Report
Speaking of *straight* is there any chance you'll write a story involving unbirth/insertion or at least some more sexual f/f stuff. Your def one of my fav macro writers and I'd love to see something like that from you ^w^
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
It's actually something I've wanted to work in for a while but haven't found the right spot for yet...don't worry, it's inevitable that I write it eventually.
Posted by johnnyboy246 1 year ago Report
Love to hear that :3. Ive always been a fan of girl's who see Tinys as more than just food, especially coming from you since I love the way you write your preds. And who's knows I might even make a render when it comes out
Posted by johnnyboy246 1 year ago Report
Also this might just be the lesbian part of my brain talking, but why do your preds never take the clothes off their prey?
Posted by TinyHunter 1 year ago Report
Literally I usually just forget to include it, haha.
Posted by johnnyboy246 1 year ago Report
Nah all good. I'm guess Im just the kinda person who prefers there prey naked is all lol
Posted by Nalzindar 10 months ago Report
Yet another great story from you, and the islander/bitchy tourist blond theme, was fantastic. I enjoyed the dynamic here and the realistic options Hailey had to consider before smuggling Nalani back to her hotel room (it reminded me of one time I did the same with some special reading stuff!), and how "natural" things proceeded when considering Hailey was new to this. The post vore sequence was also nice, fun to see the pred challenge going so smoothly for her.
Posted by TinyHunter 10 months ago Report
Yeah, my main goal for Hailey was to write a character who really didn't have much investment in being a pred and was just trying it on a lark. I think the casualness of it somehow makes it even more cruel...
Glad you enjoyed it!